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Ask the Editor questions from the past week:

Q. Is the current Punctuation section of the State Names section accurate usage? It seems to contradict the Stylebook update published today. "PUNCTUATION: Place one comma between the city and the state name, and another comma after the state name, unless ending a sentence or indicating a dateline: He was traveling from Nashville, Tenn., to Austin, Texas, en route to his home in Albuquerque, N.M. She said Cook County, Ill., was Mayor Daley's stronghold. HEADLINES: Avoid using state abbreviations in headlines whenever possible." Please advise if this is accurate. – from Pullman, Washington on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. We want to avoid using a state abbreviation in a headline, either alone or with a community -- rather, spelling out the state name. This may not always be possible in a short headline because of space restrictions. The punctuation guidance is unchanged: comma after town and state used together.

Q. Is this the correct use of affect? "It was well under the threshold of 500 individuals affected." – from Englewoof Cliffs, N.J. on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. Correct.

Q. Is a trademark symbol mandatory when referencing a trademarked item in an article? For example: "The Jardogs FollowMyHealth%uFFFD portal allows patients to access their medical records anywhere." Or could the sentence just read: "The Jardogs FollowMyHealth portal allows patients to access their medicals anywhere." – from Brooklyn, N.Y. on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. AP news stories don't use the trademark symbol because of transmission problems. Your second sentence without the symbol should be fine.

Q. Which is correct: "a tax cut of 0.25 percentage points" or "a tax cut of 0.25 percentage point"? – from Falls Church, Va. on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. ... a tax cut of 0.25 percentage point.

Q. I saw the AP entry regarding words ending in the -wide or -wise suffix, but is it acceptable to use the suffix on any word? I would think there ought to be a list of acceptable coinages; does the AP have a rule or limit on this? – from Batangas City on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. Avoid contrived combinations, such as religionwise or taxwise. Some terms are hyphenated as compound adjectives, such as street-wise. Adding the -wide suffix to proper nouns can also result in oddities: rather than Americawide, make it across America.

Q. Do you need any apostrophe s after the company's name in this sentence? Is it "said John Smith, GM's director of marketing" or "said John Smith, GM director of marketing? – from Troy, MI on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. ... said John Smith, GM's director of marketing.

Q. Can you please tell me if the ellipses and comma are used properly in the following sentence (for context, we're referring to dogsledding)? "Let your mind turn to mush ... mushing, that is." – from Jackson, Wyo. on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. Correct.

Q. Our national publication lists the name followed by city and state of every letter writer. Should the state name be abbreviated or spelled out in full? – from Chicago on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. Certain cities such as Chicago stand alone in AP datelines and stories, per the listings in the "datelines" entry. So for AP, a letter writer from the Windy City would signed off as John Doe, Chicago. If your policy is to include the state with every writer's hometown, the signer would be John Doe, Chicago, Illinois. However, the updated "state names" guidance also allows state abbreviations with cities in lists, if you choose to use that exception for the letter sign-offs.

Q. Under the new rule that states you must spell out state names in the body of a story, would that apply to a city, state listed in parenthesis, which is common practice in press releases about sport? (i.e., John Doe (Colorado Springs, Colo.) scored the game-winning goal for Team USA.) – from Colorado Springs, Colo. on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. If the press release is datelined Colorado Springs, Colo., no need to repeat the state in the Doe reference. For other hometowns in parentheses, AP would spell out the state in most cases. Exceptions include stand-alone cities, or towns in the same state as the datelined story. Important to understand that AP stories are transmitted globally, and U.S. state names are better understood when spelled out.

Q. For a bulleted list, should the first word be capitalized if not a complete sentence? – from Kingwood, Texas on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. Yes.

Q. I am currently writing a press release for one of our teams of doctors. The performed there 2,000th procedure. That being said, do you use 2,000th or 2,000? I have it in another spot as well that starts "For the 2,000th procedure..." – from St. Paul, Minn. on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. 2,000th is correct.

Q. OK, I know TV shows get quotes around them, but what about an event, like an awards show, that is annually televised but also exists as its own, well, thing separate of the actual broadcast. In particular, I am wondering about the MTV Video Music Awards. My inclination is to throw quotes around it, but I am not sure about this. Thanks. – from Berkley, MI on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. In AP stories, MTV Video Music Awards and MTV Video Music Awards show, capitalized but not enclosed in quotes. It's like the Academy Awards, capped but not in quotes. Ditto other recurring events like these.

Q. Good Morning. What is the reason for the change announced yesterday regarding spelling out state names in the body of stories? – from Annapolis, MD on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. Primarily for conformity. AP stories are transmitted globally. U.S. state names are easier to grasp when written out.

Q. We just received an email saying states are no longer abbreviated in stories, such as when used in conjunction with cities. I'm curious why this change was made. – from Columbus, Nebraska on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. Primarily for conformity. AP stories are transmitted globally. Many U.S. state names are easier to understand when written out.

Q. If %uFFFDcleanup%uFFFD is one word as a noun and adjective, why is %uFFFDsign-up%uFFFD hyphenated when it%uFFFDs used in the same context? – from Wichita, Kan. on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. Vagaries of usage. Dictionaries agree on cleanup (n. and adj.), but sign-up (n. and adj.) may still be in transition to a single word.

Q. If you're quoting someone saying, "I stop by and say hi to her," would you enclose 'hi' in quotation marks, single quotes, or neither? And would there be a comma after 'say'? – from Portland, Ore. on Thu, Apr 24, 2014

A. No need for single quotes or comma in this casual comment.

Q. In an article written from outside the U.S., when referring to the U.S. capital, is it necessary on first reference to write 'Washington, D.C.'? Or is it OK to write just Washington? – from Seoul, XX on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. Washington is sufficient unless there could be confusion with the state of Washington, in which case write Washington, D.C.

Q. A previous note (from July 12, 2012) recommended %uFFFDfishermen and women%uFFFD for nonsexist term for fishermen. What about "angler" or "anglers"? It's a common term here in Minnesota, and fishing folks who prefer gender-neutral pronouns often use it. – from St. Cloud, Minn. on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. Yes, anglers covers both genders. Good idea.

Q. When one has a direct quote where someone refers to an official without the title, would the title still be capitalized when placed in parentheses ahead of the official's name? For example, %uFFFDI talked to our County Board Chairman (Joe Blow) and he%uFFFDs in support of taking care of the museum because it%uFFFDs actually a countywide museum," John Smith said. Or would it be treated the way the sentence would be without the parenthetical information, and thus, %uFFFDI talked to our County Board chairman (Joe Blow) and he%uFFFDs in support of taking care of the museum because it%uFFFDs actually a countywide museum," John Smith said. – from Pekin, Ill. on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. The second option is better.

Q. In track and field events, does AP still use dash or run for track events. For example, is it the 100-meter dash or the 100 meters? Thanks! – from Aurora , Colo. on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. Usually it's the distance alone in AP track and field stories. Sprint, sprinter and sprinting are used in generic references to races or athletes. AP track stories also make occasional references to dash, as in, he held the 100-meter dash record for five years.

Q. Is it true AP is changing its style on abbreviating states in stories? – from Staten Island, N.Y. on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. Yes. See other Q&A's in Ask the Editor for background.

Q. In an article, when linking to a site outside the domain of the article itself, is it preferable to stay in the same browser window or to open a new window for the target content? – from Seattle on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. Better check with your local technology experts. The answer may vary from system to system.

Q. Thanks for your rapid response. What rule describes this use of the comma, please? Q. If this sentence in body copy must stand as written, is the comma correct, or should we use a semicolon? *Check and sign off on vital signs every 30 minutes for first hour, every hour thereafter* Thanks. %uFFFD from Dallas on Wed, Apr 23, 2014 A. Comma works. – from Dallas on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. The comma stands for a coordinating conjunction in what reads like a condensed instruction.

Q. In answer to a spelling question in 2008, singalong was given as the correct answer. Now, in 2014, Webster's spells it sing-along, with a hyphen. Is that also AP style? – from Palm Beach Gardens, Fla. on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. The entry in Webster's New World College Dictionary, Fourth Edition, is singalong, a compound without a hyphen. We'll stick with that spelling.

Q. I know certain cities can stand alone in datelines, but what about in body copy? Ex: " MD Andersen Cancer Center in Houston, Texas." – from Parker, Colo. on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. Houston stands alone both in AP datelines and within stories if no confusion would result. See DATELINES entry for domestic and international lists.

Q. Any truth to the reporting of May 1 being the day that state names will be spelled out in AP copy? – from KC, Missouri on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. That's correct. An AP wire advisory transmitted today said: Effective May 1, the AP will spell out state names in the body of stories. Datelines will continue to use abbreviations. The change is being made to be consistent in our style for domestic and international stories. International stories have long spelled out state names in the body of stories. State abbreviations will continue to be used in lists, agate, tabular material, nonpublishable editor's notes and credit lines. They will also be used in short-form identification of political party affiliation. Photo captions will continue to use abbreviations, too.

Q. What is the AP style to format an editor's note within a story? Is it, "Ed. - xxx" or "xxx. - Ed." or "Editor's note: xxx" Also, is the reference italicized and set off in parenthesis? Thanks. – from Memphis, Tenn. on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. See PUBLISHABLE EDITOR'S NOTES section of Sending Text Stories entry in the Stylebook. No italics or parentheses.

Q. In the credit card vernacular, which is preferred: magnetic strip or magnetic stripe? – from San Antonio on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. AP stories have used either term in news about data breaches or other credit card topics. However, magnetic strip is probably used more often.

Q. What is the appropriate punctuation for the invitation wording below? Should there be a period at the end? Does spacing the lines out on an invitation impact punctuation? President John Doe, Chairperson Jane Smith, Vice President Jim Doe Cordially invite you to attend the Excellence Awards Ceremony rcognizing outstanding individuals at the University of x. – from Kingston, R.I. on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. The AP Stylebook doesn't offer specific guidance on an invitation format. I see it's one sentence. However, in this format, you could drop the comma after Smith and capitalize Cordially. Below, you'll probably add the time and place and RSVP by a certain date.

Q. How should I abbreviate satellite communications on second reference? SATCOM or satcom? I'd also like to apply the guidance to geospatial intelligence (GEOINT or geoint) and signals intelligence (SIGINT or sigint). Thanks. – from Springfield, Va. on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. AP stories occasionally use such abbreviations in context. For example, NSA's National Sigint Requirement List in a story about surveillance of foreign politicians. A story about the launch of the fifth Wideband Global satcom spacecraft. And a story about Geospatial intelligence _ known as "geoint" _ using imagery from above to determine activity on the Earth.

Q. If this sentence in body copy must stand as written, is the comma correct, or should we use a semicolon? *Check and sign off on vital signs every 30 minutes for first hour, every hour thereafter* Thanks. – from Dallas on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. Comma works.

Q. I am copy editing an article about wine. I know riesling is lowercase but I can't seem to find a definitive answer for elbling and kerner grapes. – from Orysia, New York City, N.Y. on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. Per the "wines" entry, wine names for grape varietals are lowercase.

Q. I see the example of "3 ounces," but I don't see a general rule for measurements. The phrase I'm looking to confirm is "...less than 2 inches long to an average weight of 200 pounds and length of 3 feet." Should "2" and "3" be written out instead? Thank you. – from Washington on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. Use figures for these measurements.

Q. Hi, for software development methodologies like Agile, Waterfall, Scrum, etc., should they be initial capped or lowercase? – from Batangas City on Wed, Apr 23, 2014

A. An AP story capped Agile in an item about software IPOs. The other names don't appear in an archive search.

Q. In stories, it OK to use the term "mudslide," or is "landslide" the definitive term? – from San Diego on Tue, Apr 22, 2014

A. AP stories report the terms used by authorities. In the case of the Washington state disaster, mudslide predominates but landslide is also used in descriptions.

Q. Hello - When referring to members of an association or company would the word get capitalized? For example, currently as an association we have 82 members who are city utilities. We refer to them in print capitalized as XYZ Member. I have also seen large companies, who instead of referring to their employees as employees, say "Member" or "Partners" and then capitalize the reference. Another example are members of a conduit. In the bylaws we refer to them generally as "Friends of Public Power Members" or "the Member". Hope this makes sense, any advice is appreciated. – from WI on Tue, Apr 22, 2014

A. AP news stories wouldn't capitalize member.

Q. How would you refer to a retired military person and the branch of service he or she served in? Is this correct: "Retired Army Capt. Thomas Jefferson addressed university students today." Thanks. – from Austin, Texas on Tue, Apr 22, 2014

A. Correct. See RETIRED OFFICERS section of the "military titles" entry.

Q. For patented products, would you capitalize first letters, like a book title? Ex: Al "Bubba" Baker pitched his patented De-Boned [his hyphen] Baby Back Rib Steak on ABC's "Shark Tank." – from Cleveland, Ohio on Tue, Apr 22, 2014

A. Yes, using "brand names" and "trademarks" guidance.

Q. Am I correct to consider the food combinations in the following recipe titles noun phrases that do not require a hyphen? I am editing a cookbook that includes many recipe titles similar to these. Strawberry Basil Shake Veggie Herb Flax Crackers Spinach Vegetable Soup Coconut Quinoa Pilaf – from Milwaukee on Tue, Apr 22, 2014

A. No hyphens but only the first word would be capitalized in a listing. See Food Guidelines section of the Stylebook.

Q. I see in the AP Stylebook that we have co-signer. Webster's New World has it cosigner and also cosign (verb). Does AP follow Webster's for cosign? – from Orysia, New York City, N.Y. on Tue, Apr 22, 2014

A. Using the co- guidance, co-sign is also hyphenated as a verb indicating status.

Q. Does AP offer any guidance on the use of a comma before "such as"? I see it both ways within AP entries: tablet (Source: AP Stylebook) A touch-screen device, such as an iPad or Kindle Fire, that can be connected to the Internet via Wi-Fi or cellular data networks. (with comma) social networks (Source: AP Stylebook, Social Media section) Online networks such as Facebook or Twitter where people share personal and professional information and content, and connect with friends and colleagues. (no comma) Please advise. Thanks! – from Oshkosh, Wis. on Tue, Apr 22, 2014

A. Phrases introduced by such as, meaning for example, are often set off with commas. But no comma preceding essential examples as in the second definition.

Q. Should quotation marks go around onomatopoeias? In this sentence, for example: "When you're shopping, it's easy get caught up in the sound of cha-ching, cha-ching and the excitement of new purchases." – on Tue, Apr 22, 2014

A. Quotation marks aren't needed.

Q. Hi, I have a question in regards to the AP style for a press release of a quote. Where does the "said" go. I read that the "said" should come before the name and title for a public relations release. I was told that the the last example was a sign of an inexperienced writer. Please help! I have gotten myself really confused on which way is proper in AP style. Thank you so much for your help. Example sentence: %uFFFDThis is a great opportunity to bring the community together,%uFFFD said David Richard, American Cancer Society Executive Director. %uFFFDEveryone knows someone and has somehow been touched by cancer and Relay is an opportunity to fight back.%uFFFD --or-- %uFFFDThis is a great opportunity to bring the community together,%uFFFD David Richard, American Cancer Society Executive Director,said. %uFFFDEveryone knows someone and has somehow been touched by cancer and Relay is an opportunity to fight back.%uFFFD – from Pass Christian, Miss. on Tue, Apr 22, 2014

A. Use the first example, but lowercase executive director. In a followup quote, Richard said.

Q. Does "a host of" take a singular or plural verb? "A host of doctors was/were awaiting him." – from , Gary, Indiana on Tue, Apr 22, 2014

A. Plural verb.

Q. To conduct a financial check up ... is it check up, check-up or checkup? – on Tue, Apr 22, 2014

A. It's checkup (n.).

Q. Is it acceptable to include the connecting words when the subject's job title is a sentence fragment? For example, if Jon Smith's title was "vice president public affairs,government relations," would it be written as "Jon Smith, vice president for public affairs and government relations...?" – from Washington on Tue, Apr 22, 2014

A. Yes, it's acceptable for clarity.

Q. Which is correct? On the contrary, I am quite well OR On the contrary; I am quite well. Please advise. Thank you much. – from Kansas City, Mo. on Tue, Apr 22, 2014

A. Use a comma instead of a semicolon.

Q. What is the correct abbreviation for W.Va. in headlines? – from Washington on Tue, Apr 22, 2014

A. As you have it: W.Va.

Q. Can you please clarify an apparenty descrepancy? A 2009 response regarding a question about "best-in-class" vs. "best in class" states that hyphens are appropriate when the word is used as a modifier. However, a February 2014 response states that this word is usually used without hypes in that it is a judging award. Please clarify. – from Austin, Texas on Mon, Apr 21, 2014

A. As a compound modifier: best-in-class solutions. As a stand-alone award: Best in class.

Q. Please help clarify the use of "of" and "from" in the following context: Which one is the correct headline? "Statewide awareness week announced to highlight public health dangers of mosquitoes" or "Statewide awareness week announced to highlight public health dangers from mosquitoes" – from Santa Fe Springs, Calif. on Mon, Apr 21, 2014

A. Both are correct, though dangers of mosquitoes seems better in the headline.

Q. For a headline, what is the possessive of US? Is it US's? US'? – from Chicago on Mon, Apr 21, 2014

A. The second is correct: US' ...

Q. I am unsure about how to apply hyphens to the phrase: "customer owned and operated." In context: designed for one specific application dependent on customer owned and operated equipment for normal operation. Is it customer-owned-and-operated? Thank you. – from Portland, Ore. on Mon, Apr 21, 2014

A. ... customer-owned and -operated equipment ...

Q. Snap-on Inc. or Snap-on Incorporated? Normally I would follow the AP rule to use the abbreviation, but the NYSE website has the company name listed both ways. Plus, our foundation staff is under the impression that the company prefers the "Incorporated" spelled out. – from Leesburg, Va. on Mon, Apr 21, 2014

A. AP business stories use Snap-on Inc.

Q. The "company names" listing does not provide a definitive answer for this question, in my opinion. My co-workers are confusing the actual spelling of a brand with its brand mark, for example: IRWIN (all caps) for Irwin Industrial Tools. I've found the AP rule for company names (do not use all-capital letter names unless the letters are individually pronounced), but is there any listing that directly covers brands and this problem? In the case of Irwin, it's a subsidiary of another company and thus doesn't have a listing on the stock exchange sites, so I can't check it there. My co-workers get doubly confused because in its news releases, Irwin tends to place its name in all caps to make it stand out (even the last name of its founder, Mr. Irwin). So, all caps or upper- and lowercase? – from Leesburg, Va. on Mon, Apr 21, 2014

A. Capitalize the first letter of a brand name and, in some cases, a second letter, as in AstroTurf. Otherwise, lowercase other letters unless pronounced individually. See "brand names" and "trademarks" entries, in addition to "company names" guidance.

Q. The context of a recent article I edited is that a soccer player was injured and received treatment, and has finally decided that he will do his rehab in his home country. This is the sentence I had trouble with: Brown has been expected to stay in Scotland for treatment and rehab. Is the present perfect tense (has been expected) correct in this sentence? Half of the expectation can definitely be confirmed as he did his treatment in Scotland, but he has not started his rehab yet, although he did confirm he will start it later in Scotland. Thanks. – from Virginia, XX on Sun, Apr 20, 2014

A. Yes, the phrasing should be more nuanced on the rehab. He underwent treatment in Scotland and confirmed he would stay on there for rehab.

Q. I am editing a short piece in which a photographer mentions having shot in "Israel/Palestine." What would be AP's suggestions for treating this? Thank you! – from Brooklyn, N.Y. on Sun, Apr 20, 2014

A. He took photos in Israel and Palestine ... or, in Israel and adjacent Palestinian territories.

Q. Your listing on "team" indicates that a team is always singular, since it refers to a unit. Does that mean you can never use it to simply indicate several or "a lot"? "A team of bees are buzzing around us," for example. What about "a host of...," would that be plural? – from Gary, Indiana on Sun, Apr 20, 2014

A. Yes, or a swarm of bees are buzzing around us.

Q. The entry for Easter begins this way: "Christian holy day commemorating the Resurrection of Jesus Christ. Christians believe Jesus was raised from the dead three days after his Crucifixion." But doesn't the capitalization of "Resurrection" and "Crucifixion" contradict the AP entry on religious references, which says: "LIFE OF CHRIST: Capitalize the names of major events in the life of Jesus Christ in references that do not use his name. ... "But use lowercase when the words are used with his name: The ascension of Jesus into heaven took place 40 days after his resurrection from the dead."? Also, if the cutline reads "Fausto Gonzalez, as Jesus, is fastened to a wooden cross during a re-enactment of the crucifixion at St. Patrick's Catholic Church ... ," should "crucifixion" be uppercase or lowercase? Thank you. – from Fort Wayne, Ind., on Fri, Apr 18, 2014

A. The spellings in the "Easter" entry will be amended to conform. Thank you.

Q. Just checked the Stylebook, and there is no entry for military occupational specialty, or MOS. Questions: 1) Is MOS acceptable on first reference, or should one start with military occupational specialty? 2) Lower-case or capitalize the first letter of each word? 3) MOS or M.O.S.? Thanks! – from Sarnia, XX on Fri, Apr 18, 2014

A. On first reference, spell out lowercase military occupational specialty. On second reference, MOS could be used, though military job or assignment work just as well.

Q. You advised me to hyphenate "Pre-workout" used in a heading. Does this mean "Post workout" should be hyphenated also? Each word stands alone as a heading (no nouns follow). – from Chesterfield Townshi, MI on Fri, Apr 18, 2014

A. Yes, see the Stylebook's "post-" entry.

Q. There's no specific entry for Kharkov, so we have been using that per the NW dictionary. But I'm told your wire stories have been spelling it Kharkiv instead. Is the latter official style? – from Washington, D.C. on Fri, Apr 18, 2014

A. AP stories from Ukraine have been using the Kharkiv spelling for several years. I'm not aware of any announcement.

Q. AP notes laws Capitalize legislative acts but not bills: the Taft-Hartley Act, the Kennedy bill; what about city ordinances? – from Seattle on Fri, Apr 18, 2014

A. In AP stories, ordinance is invariably spelled lowercase with a brief description of the action.

Q. How would you type "Pre Workout" when using as a heading to list foods to eat prior to weight training? Hyphenate, one word or two words? – from Chesterfield Townshi, MI on Fri, Apr 18, 2014

A. Make it Pre-workout using guidance in the Stylebook's "pre-" entry for a word not in Webster's NWCD, Fourth.

Q. I know that I shouldn't capitalize a title that comes after a person's name in body text, but does that rule apply to bylines of submitted pieces? Example: "Written by ____ _____, president of _______" – from San Francisco on Fri, Apr 18, 2014

A. The title is correctly lowercase in your byline format, which differs from AP's format.

Q. In this sentence, would it be house-made or housemade? "We%uFFFDre now serving two housemade meal options each week." – from Atlanta on Fri, Apr 18, 2014

A. AP culinary references generally hyphenate the modifier. However, the term may be trending toward a compound, along the lines of homemade.

Q. Semicolons are used to separate items in a series if the items themselves require commas. Is this still true if the commas occur within parentheses? E.g., The team brought fruit (apples, oranges, and grapes); silverware and plates; music; and chairs. Should the sentence use commas or semicolons? – from Washington on Fri, Apr 18, 2014

A. The team brought fruit (apples, oranges and grapes), silverware and plates, music and chairs.

Q. What is AP style for the name of the breakaway region of Moldova east of the Dneister River, Transnistria or Trans-Dneister? – from Washington on Fri, Apr 18, 2014

A. Trans-Dniester in AP stories.

Q. Hi -- I saw the Ask the Editor regarding "ramp up" as a verb; as a noun, can I assume it is hyphenated? Thanks! – from Washington on Fri, Apr 18, 2014

A. I see only two-word, no hyphen spellings in the AP story archive. Some dictionaries may hyphenate the noun and adjective forms.

Q. I see in copy these days the use of "noted" to avoid "said." Is that an acceptable use of the word in news? – from Anna Maria, Fla. on Fri, Apr 18, 2014

A. One dictionary definition of note, the verb, is to mention particularly. But as a variation for said in an attribution, noted shouldn't be overused.

Q. When describing multiple types of cancer - should one use cancer in plural as "cancers" (it sounds wrong) For example: "....mortality resulting from multiple types of cancer" or "...mortality resulting from multiple types of cancers". Thanks. – from Tzoran, Israel on Fri, Apr 18, 2014

A. I'd go with multiple types of cancer. Do you also mean mortality rates?

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